literature

The Cashier

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Sitting up straight,
prissy in a blouse.
She'll put your money in
and take your money out.

Handling the cash.
"Twenties or tens?"
Sign the dotted line,
here's a bank pen.

'Laura' on her name tag.
'Sally' or 'Kay'.
She speaks very sweetly,
"have a nice day."
Not doing much poetry nowadays but here's one I made up.
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megatarget's avatar
Nicely formed.

I could draw a couple of meanings from this, which I suppose is the best way for poetry to go: multiple interpretations.